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Save Me

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Hundreds.
Thousands.
Millions of,
Miles away.

Worlds away.

Yet, the sound of,
Your dangerous heart beating,
Echos in my ears, and I know,
You are alive and breathing.

I scratch, claw, fight,
At this translucent sheet,
Of clouded ice.

It is unbreakable,
Most will say,
But I will destory it,
So it will no longer,
Stand in my way.

So that I may,
Hold your illuminated spirit,
In my brused arms,
One day.

My lungs ache,
With a frozen fire.
I am drowining in these,
Black, heartless waters.
I can feel the demons,
As they try to over power me.
To cease my damaged heart,
And keep it from beating.

The misty ice.
The murky waters.
It darkens my sight.
It numbs my fingers,
From the warm feel of,
Your flesh.

I am drowning,
My love.
I can not breath,
Precious.
My throat clenched shut.
But, baby, I wont give up.

My motivation is,
The ever lasting vibration -
The feel of the blood shooting through,
Your scared veins.

It does not matter how far away,
Or how thick this frozen water may be.
I can still hear every one of,
Your capillaries bleed.

Save me?

You, battling feircely,
Above the ice.
All alone.
Your frostbitten fingers,
Desperatly peeling at the blood stained,
Scarlet snow.

You are so very strong,
Fighting your demons,
And mine as well.
Stay loud, my love,
And please, please,
Please, do not,
Give up.

Baby, break through,
Take my hand,
And save me.
So I've been writing poems for my lover, but, most of them have been spoken word.

This time, I tried to put some ryhyme into the words. He said it helps him follow it better, so I tried. Even though it is more like forced ryhme. Ryhming is hard!

:heart: :heart: :heart:

Yeah.
It has been a long while since I've posted any poetry on here.

Oh, and for my watchers I am going to post a story soon!
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ElviraTepes's avatar
:omg: this is so sweet mimi